(you actually are supposed to read in between the lines)

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Teen Poetry #8

(you actually are supposed to read in between the lines)

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

0 posted 2008-02-10 01:56 PM

when I'm with you..

I look in the mirror and hate what I see

when I'm with you..

I frown every chance I get.

When I'm with you..

I'm anything but confident.

when I'm with you..

I'm miserable.

when I'm with you..

I sob every five minutes.

when I'm with you..

I cry tears of pain.

when I'm with you..

I'm depressed.

when I'm with you..

I hate myself.

When I'm with you..

when I'm not with you.

can you read between the lines and see what I really feel?

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-10 03:33 PM

All right here's what I've got, your depressed when your not with them, and when you are your not?
Good write (I love riddles)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-11 10:36 PM

ohh hunn... this wuz amazing I really loved it... I dont usually read between the lines but since yooh said tue i did... i wouldn't have guessed that ending... at all great poem!!!!
Krysti

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

3 posted 2008-02-12 03:15 PM

thanks guys. =]
i didn't orginally want to right it out like this, but I thought of it and thought it'd be a different and cool way to do it.

totallytrue101
New Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 3
Canada

4 posted 2008-02-21 01:20 AM

i get it. very nice

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-21 11:09 AM

wow im not use to reading in between the lines. but really good poem. i love it. this is deffenently going in my library! lol. keep up the good work!!!

~Zach~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-02-21 04:29 PM

Depression isn't a good thing!

At least you got it all out on the site and

showed us your true pains that you are

Feeling, I'm not here to be a guidence

person, But thats what I think might help lol

ARCTIC WIND

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