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Teen Poetry #8

song for ceirweigh

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2008-02-15 05:55 PM

you owe me a thousand wept,
you stole the song from my young lips.
hollows formed where love once slept,
eager to be lit.
danced in passions lullaby,
i longed for you to look at me.
see me with your goastly eyes
take this desprate melody.

i see the way you don't believe,
through all these years, you only smiled.
you hid behind your wall of steel,
because i knew your inner light.

i can't count the sleepless nights
i wondered how you'd hear my word,
closing in, the truth in sight,
just as soon, you plunged the sword.
died in passions lullaby,
i knew you'd never look at me,
still loving your goastly eyes
as you kill this melody.

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-15 06:53 PM

Beutiful. Absolutly beutiful.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-15 07:36 PM

wow this is beautiful, amazing, outstanding, artistic and poetic. Great job. this is deffenently going to my library.

~Zach~

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-02-15 09:04 PM

hey hey,
  thanx fer the compliments, i really apreciate it.
  !Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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