Teen Poetry #8 |
locket of mine |
crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
XxForever.BrokenxX, this is not the poem i told you i'd post, im still working on it this pearl pendant, hangs loosely at my throat. locked away from sight in an obvious corner, for my love to hide within. a pretty thing for the eye to see, at first. what lies behind this heart shaped hinge? my love conceals it's face. a locket contains your love, desires, joy. what is in your heart. please don't open mine, spare yourself the chance. i'll just be one more girlfor you to worry about. telling yourself you're doing a good deed. if you asked me why i have what i have. i have but one love to place inside this locket. once, i opened it i looked inside. my eyes are now dead my fingers, numb blue frozen lips and a trembling spine. worlds inside me i barely new. my body dead my heart the same. inside this locket my one love. if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Beutiful first post! Welcome to pip! Your poem has great meaning. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
great poem and welcome to PIP!!! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
holy crap tracey! i really didn't know you could write so good!! WOW! amazing poem, have a great weekend! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahhh Tracey beautiful poem I loved it!!! Welcome to Passions Krysti |
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