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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
ambiguous consise very very nice determined lazy how crazy exact opposites things mesh somethings make a mess |
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Lordadon Junior Member
since 2008-02-14
Posts 18Singapore |
I'm not very sure if i'm right on this, might want to see what others say. My first time commenting.But poems, any languages are meant to bring messages across to your targeted audience, make sure you know your targeted audience, and do not assume that the audience will know any of your lingo. Also, you might want to tell us why or what u are writing this poem for, a short description to capture the attention. |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
to be completely honest is a abstract poem its not really suppose to make sense. i do get what you mean i should have added a description. -jenna |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Umm im sort of understanding this poem but then again... it left me confused too. and i know its abstract but it would help to atleast know what u were writing about. ~Zach~ |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
it was about how things are exact opposites but they still mesh. how everything meshes sometimes making a mess. -jenna |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
While I enjoyed your poem miss wolf (I got some meaning from it but more than you I think) I must ask you if you understand the purpose of abstract poetry? Now I'm no expert but I know this much: when writing abstract poetry you want to take a topic and make an analogy. Try taking somthing in your life and writing with it in mind. Think of some comparison you could make between your (emphasis here)specific topic and then just don't outright say anything on your topic. Keep it nice and vague but with everything pointing back there. Good luck with it, it's hard to do without some random inspiration. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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