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wolf girl
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0 posted 2008-02-13 10:58 PM



dead
thats how it will always be
numb
thats how it will stay
shame
it wont go away
broken
things will stay
wanting
is how im left in the end

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1 posted 2008-02-14 05:19 PM


great write. i know this feeling.

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2 posted 2008-02-14 06:41 PM


one word... nice. i like it. i really know how ur feeling and can conect to this. great write!!
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