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Chosen Torture |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I cringe, but force the knife still deeper Such a horrid ripping pain Torture tears at all I believe I began with hopes to gain Now all I feel is torture and pain Amore is a simple phrase But a many many layered thing Coals that warm, or fires that blaze I began to love I know that is true And then, well, what could I do Foolishly I planned to bring her to me Knowing we would part Now I cringe, and force the knife still deeper I’m cutting out my heart "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Gurl_unknown_11 Junior Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 17california |
this poem is really deep and has so much emotion,but its awesome!!!good jod!!  |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ohhh, how i know this feeling. it always seems like it's those of us who expose ourselves get the deepest cuts huh? i understand this so well, i hope you are better. you know you can always talk to me. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
Great poem!!! u can certanly feel da vibe n it really makes ppl think bout wat strengh n weakness really is. It's hot |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I love this, i really do. At first i was like "okay, wheres he going with this" but then u know...i finished reading it..lol Great job! and i know the feeling to...k bye! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
your right- it resounds my very poem- don't read this poem, yes- nonmember? that's my story . . . -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Yep you got it Kate. My storys just a little less complicated, I have seven or eight rivals so it should be easy enough just to drop out and let it all run by. Should, but at the time I wrote this that course of action felt sooo painful. It's just she was so open and I began to love her like a sister before I realy had any choice in the matter. After that well, getting her out of my head is still hard, and I don't realy want to. Then I see her hurting and I want to help, I want to be as open with her as she was with me...but if I am that means my feelings to. The thought scares me and well...if she went after me...(shudder). Sorry that just sort of came out. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
fumm you're in steve's shoes alright, he's only got four rivals, so 5 guys vying for me, how fun . . . lol. yea- do her a favor and fade out, from expirence, women really (speaking as a woman) need and love to be loved- the more love you give the type that she is the more she'll feel she needs it and it will be hard for her- and then harder for you b/c you don't want to let her b/c she doesn't want to let you go, and then one day you'll wake up and realize that maybe she's not the right one- even though she's incredible and wonderful and kind and sweet and lovely, and a good match- she won't be THE ONE you know? and you'll love her- oh how you'll love her- die, live, breathe, survive at her command, but you messed with the plan, you'll see that though you have a wonderful life- it was ment for you and someone else. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Well I don't want to fade out of her life completely. It's a hard balance to strike, to love her as I do now (too much understanding you know) and sit on the sidlines as other men take their stab and fail miserably. Knowing what I could be to her if I gave in ANY effort at all. The fact that shes a Witch and I'm a Mormon helps I just sit back and let things go.  "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
aww i hope you can resolve this problem. if you need anyone to talk to, im here for ya'. u know where u can find me. later ~Zach~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
what a fine pair we are my friend, a witch and an athiest. my don't we pick 'em well. hgahahahahahahahahahahahahahah now i don't feel so pathetic. hahahahahahahahahaha, love you frank, really i do. lol. hahahahaha -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Oh yeah you hit the nail on the head with that one. heh heh. How pathetic. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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