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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-02-13 11:18 AM

Don’t Read this Poem

It’s about time that you showed up
Too long you’ve seen the shadows
Of my silent silhouette
Draped in tattered lace

It’s been a few days
Since we’ve had a moment dear
I’m getting tired of waiting
It’s taking too long this time

I can see my future flash before my eyes
I discard the one of me and you
It maybe happy with much joy
But dear I feel in my bones . . .

It’s another that I need
One that I’ve yet to meet
It would be a pretty slap sir
To pretend other wise for long

So be quiet for now love
For the moment I’m all yours
But the day is not too far
Where we will part ways

And as always, we can not be

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

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BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-13 06:45 PM

Wow! Great poem again Kate!
This actualy reminds me of my Chosen Torture piece. Had the same meaning and I'm guessing the same connotations.
Great job anyway.
ps whats with the title, was I realy not supposed to read this or what?

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-13 08:10 PM

Okay just because u say "dont" doesnt mean i wont lol so i read your poem anyway. this is GREAT!. its one of your greatest poems ever! although it doesnt rhyme the emotion behind your words burst out uncontrolably lol.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-02-13 09:27 PM

no i was hoping that the title would draw the appropriate audience, those who just can't resist- especally when told not to- i just love reverse phyiscology (ik ik i can't spell . . .)

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

pen&paper
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4 posted 2008-02-14 03:48 PM

i really loved this! Great write, Kate.

Cierra

Falling rain

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5 posted 2008-02-14 06:44 PM

well just to let u know. im a sucker when it comes to reveres phycology. LOL! but yea i can understand why u did it...

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2008-02-14 07:02 PM

hahahaha glad i'm entertaining- i aim to please . . .

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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7 posted 2008-02-15 11:11 AM

Well you sure d a great job of it! hahaha

~Zach~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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8 posted 2008-02-15 11:30 AM

aww thanks Zach.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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