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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Okay i was sitting in history bored out of my mind and while my history techer was lecturing i wrote this little poem... Out of this cold, worn out heart Begains a new start My subtle tears, begain to dry With this new hope, I will try Try to bring hope and light To this sad, depressing sight My passions fire will burn once again To dry away all the rain From the ashes, flowers will bloom This empty void, fills the room |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Nice job. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
nice job?? what are u talking about Earl?! that was GREAT!!! this is a really fantastic pome Zach! can't wait to see more of your random poems!! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Thank you Emily! that means alot to me. =] |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Zach, this is great, you are rapidly improving as can be seen with each new post....Well done & keep it up. Regards John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
i'll try to john. im not much of a poet like everyone else here on passions. im just a poet who does what he does for the good of the people. (idk if that makes sense but it did to me lol) thanks guys for your support!! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Zach That makes a lot of sense, however, do not put yourself down. You are equally as good as any 'poet' that posts on here and far better than you think / give yourself credit for. For a long time I used to write and worry how my stuff was accepted or percieved. Then one day I woke up to the fact that it made no sense to concern myself with how people reacted because everyone will see what I do differently. Worrying about these things is not going to make any difference at all....hope you can follow my menadering there? Have good day Son... Cheers John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I will take that into consideration. your questions make me think (which is a good thing in my case lol) I really appretate your support john. your very helpful when i have my time of need lol well i guess i'll talk to you guys later. bye! |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
ooooeeee LOL i love it! Da vibe is ridiculous it's krazy kool! it's amazing how being bored in class leads to this stuff |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
No problem, happy to be of some use ! You know where I am & how to get a hold of me if you need anything, OK? Later John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
will do john! thanks Later, Zach |
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Lordadon Junior Member
since 2008-02-14
Posts 18Singapore |
nice work on this, it's like rekindling passions once again, for someone who lost his passion, due to any reasons, i hope he will have the chance to be like this. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Lordadon, I was acctually writing about a time where i just lost all hope and i was in utter depression but then one day i woke up said to myself. "You got get over this Zach. it does no good to be like this and do you like urself like this??" And well then i wrote this poem. in a way your are correct about my poem. and thanks for reading!! ~Zach~ |
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