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Endless Tears |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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White as snow, you'r limp hand lies in mine. I remember how we used to cry at night, I remember you were sad. Now you have said goodbye, left me here alone. I wont be able to survive, didn't I say you were my everything? Why am I the only one crying, I know they loved you to. Why does it seem that no one cares when I know they do? They must regret not showing it, why would they let you go so esaly? My tears wont stop, I can't forget the way you would laugh; The way that you and I would tell each other everything. I don't understand why you would do this to me! You know I can't continue like this, all alone. Why did you leave me? I thought you were getting better! I could see it in you'r eye's, you'r smile was coming back. I'll sit here beside you'r grave utill I can be with you again, and untill I am no longer crying. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Awwee Emily just give it time everything gets better after tyme.... if yooh ever need to talk I am always here for yooh... Best Wishes Krysti |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
hey emily. nice poem i understand completely what your going through. if you wanna talk to me my msn is [email protected]. wuts ur msn? (if you have one) |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This is a very emotional poem it grasps your heart and squeezes it until your reading and also feeling the poets pain. GREAT JOB! |
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Ri Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67Blackburn, England |
aww that is so amazing but sad at the same time Great work =) |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
Wowies =] This is a great peice of work =] Wkd. xxx |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
thanks guys. I appreciate it. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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