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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-02-04 06:15 PM



White as snow, you'r limp
hand lies in mine. I remember
how we used to cry at night,
I remember you were sad. Now
you have said goodbye, left me
here alone. I wont be able to
survive, didn't I say you
were my everything?

Why am I the only one crying,
I know they loved you to. Why
does it seem that no one cares
when I know they do? They must
regret not showing it, why would
they let you go so esaly?

My tears wont stop, I can't forget
the way you would laugh; The way
that you and I would tell each
other everything. I don't understand
why you would do this to me!
You know I can't continue like
this, all alone.

Why did you leave me? I thought
you were getting better! I could
see it in you'r eye's, you'r smile
was coming back. I'll sit here beside
you'r grave utill I can be with you
again, and untill I am no longer
crying.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-02-05 02:11 AM


Awwee Emily just give it time everything gets better after tyme.... if yooh ever need to talk I am always here for yooh...
Best Wishes
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-02-05 06:38 PM


hey emily. nice poem i understand completely what your going through. if you wanna talk to me my msn is zach_booker@hotmail.com. wuts ur msn? (if you have one)
fromme2U
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3 posted 2008-02-06 01:00 PM


This is a very emotional poem it grasps your heart and squeezes it until your reading and also feeling the poets pain. GREAT JOB!
Ri
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Blackburn, England
4 posted 2008-02-06 01:10 PM


aww that is so amazing but sad at the same time
Great work =)

LittleWillow
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5 posted 2008-02-06 02:50 PM


Wowies =] This is a great peice of work =]

Wkd.

xxx

XxForever.BrokenxX
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6 posted 2008-02-06 10:11 PM


thanks guys. I appreciate it.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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