While it just began i see the end.

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Teen Poetry #8

While it just began i see the end.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-02-02 06:00 PM

Hello everyone this is Falling rain (Zach) speaking. This poem that I am posting is not mine. Its my friends Keagan Lear's poem. I'm posting it for him on my account. So if gunna give credit, give it to Keagan. Thanks guys!
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With every step i take my life seems to slip,

I don't know hot to change should I use this clip?

With my life would you like to compare?

i just seem to slither down in this chair

Before i forget this just let me say

That this has went through my head day-by-day

Why does it always seem that i am pretending?

I sit in the darkness i'm tired of venting

I don't need any help i can stand on my own

All i have to do is stay inside the walls of this home

My windows are breaking, emotions are flying

But outside my body just keeps dying

Why can't I run away, stay away, hide away from this hell?

It is all that has happened that has kept me in this shell

Don't stop thinking this is the end, keep beliveing

Becuase im still here, and i'm not leaving

signed--Keagan Lear

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-02-02 10:19 PM

Hi Keagan..
Love the poem.. Really do.. you have a great talent.. Please Keep writing..
Much Love,
Jess

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