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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2008-01-28 10:08 PM


worst thing ive ever written!!!! but obviously im really tired. lol

so tired
need some sleep
give me a pillow
and just let me be

you dont know what ive been through
you dont know what ive done
so dont bother me
cause i wont be no fun

dont worry that im unhappy
because im always like this
its nothing new to me
so stop giving me the fist

just go away
and and just let me lie
down on my bed
i want to slowly die

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2008-01-29 12:20 PM


I def don't think this is one of your worst.. in fact i think its one of your best.. I've been there and things do get better.. they always do... Just look for the light in the mornings because soon enough the haze will clear and you will find your way..

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2008-01-29 12:32 PM


o well thank u revenge.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2008-01-29 12:39 PM


YESS Leah hunnie I loved this
Krysti

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2008-01-29 12:42 PM


haha thanx krysti!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2008-01-29 05:36 PM


lol
rebelangelv
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6 posted 2008-01-29 09:08 PM


lol yea tired...

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

XxForever.BrokenxX
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7 posted 2008-01-31 06:03 PM


I also think this is a wonderful poem. They are right, deffinetly not you'r worst.
Falling rain
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8 posted 2008-02-01 05:57 PM


its okay. everyone has a bad day. its not your worst

rebelangelv
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9 posted 2008-02-01 07:14 PM


idk y u all keep thinking this is good but thank u n e way! lol
thanx everyone

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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