Teen Poetry #8 |
Sleepy Death |
rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
worst thing ive ever written!!!! but obviously im really tired. lol so tired need some sleep give me a pillow and just let me be you dont know what ive been through you dont know what ive done so dont bother me cause i wont be no fun dont worry that im unhappy because im always like this its nothing new to me so stop giving me the fist just go away and and just let me lie down on my bed i want to slowly die only a vampire can love you forever. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I def don't think this is one of your worst.. in fact i think its one of your best.. I've been there and things do get better.. they always do... Just look for the light in the mornings because soon enough the haze will clear and you will find your way.. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
o well thank u revenge. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
YESS Leah hunnie I loved this Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
haha thanx krysti! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
lol |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
lol yea tired... only a vampire can love you forever. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I also think this is a wonderful poem. They are right, deffinetly not you'r worst. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
its okay. everyone has a bad day. its not your worst |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
idk y u all keep thinking this is good but thank u n e way! lol thanx everyone only a vampire can love you forever. |
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