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Once Again
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Once Again |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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One simple topic can make tears pour, finally I can cry! I didn't think I would be able to again, I thought I would be lost foever. My chest is aching, now the sobbing has stoped. There is more to come but for now it's enough. Still alone, a puddle at me feet, this is how my day has come to rest. I thank you for letting me out, making the tears pour once more. Now for one night maybe I'll sleep, instead of just lying here. I undersand what it means to be locked away, frozen in pain and trying to escape. Now it's not just the pain but the satisfying emptyness. Once again I feel whole and empty, and I thank you for letting me go. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
(Gulp) Great prose. I love the way you put that across. I've never been there but I can feel the pain behind your character. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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