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and beautiful moments will end. |
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lustforgood Junior Member
since 2008-01-01
Posts 14singapore, singapore |
Look to the sky, what do you see? A reflection of us, you and me. Tell me more and let me listen. The sky is blue and so are we Do you see the light like shine us all? Is the cloud dark and waiting for rainfall? Though I reckon today gonna rain Baby don't cry now, my love, this is how it begins I'm here with you with sorrows of your heart, Tell me more or let me start. I'm here with you all along, Poison me with your arrow and let me bleed Your pain is mine too, feed me, feed So tell me darling what's going on. So far I've been asking on and on. |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is a wonderful write i really enjoyed reading it. welcome to passion. -jenna |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
it made me think- which is a good thing that i'm not accostumed to. it was beautiful in a way that i can't describe, well done R. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Wow. The meaning in here is so layered, complex it would take me ages to figure it all out. Wonderful job! (and going directly to my library!) "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow loved this amazing write Krysti |
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