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Teen Poetry #8

A dream is not enough...

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2008-01-26 11:43 AM

Is it wrong for me to love you
Knowing so little about your life?
Maybe I'm just being foolish
For putting my heart through all this strife.

What I feel could not be mistaken
For lust or infatuation;
What I feel for you seems real,
And it brightens up every dull situation.

What if nothing ever comes of us?
And I never get to tell you how I feel?
What if I keep it all inside?
And I never get to know if my feelings are real?

All I know is every time I think of you
I want to open up my heart,
For some reason I'm afraid
That nothing will ever start.

If I let you know how I feel
I don't want to look stupid
And see the look on your face
Asking me why I did what I did.

How I want so much to hold you
And feel your arms around me
Telling me you feel the same
And together we could truly be.

I look into your sparkling eyes
And smile back at you
As we are about to kiss, the dream ends
I realize it's not true.

You could never feel that way for me
You could never look at me that way.
So before I go to bed at night
I kneel down and pray.

For a chance to get to know you
As a friend and hopefully more
As I grow to love you day by day
These dreams don't suffice like before.

I need more than dreams
I need you.
And I need to feel happy
I need this love to be true

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-01-26 03:35 PM

This is a beautiful poem, I liked the way you put it so it was very understandble. Great job.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-27 09:10 AM

Wow amazing, I really liked it, you could feel the desperation in the poem.. and I definitely could relate so bravo

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-01-28 02:12 AM

Ohhh Chriss hunnie I loved this.. A LOT!!!!! try getting to know her more.... get two know whutt she likes and maybe u too will really hit it off <3
Krysti

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