Teen Poetry #8 |
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I will eat you (LOL) |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I will eat you (LOL) I'm hungry. Real hungry. Time for a snack. Since ice cream's no good, and pizza won't do, this rumbling must mean I'm hungry for you. I've got a taste. Will it be enough? When you laugh, it makes me hungry...for more. When you cry, your tears eat away...to my core. The cup's half empty, but seeing you makes it half full. Somtimes your words are full of spice, sometimes they're bittersweet. Sometimes your words mince and cut, like I was some piece of meat. I'm not hungry anymore, but I'm not really full. Is there room for more? You and I are a recipe for disaster, a lunch combo set for fun. When the day is over, and are time is spent and done, you smile and laugh and wave good-bye, 'till the next time we meet. That smile filled me up. That laugh was like dessert. And the final wave was the cherry on top. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I just looked back on this after writing this a day ago. I wonder if I sound too stalkerish? Hope not... We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Awwww i loved it! it was adorable!!!!!!!!!!!! no- not stalkerish, it just sounds like you were having fun with eating her up lol. it's so cute!!!!!!!!!! -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Andre I totally loved thisss noice poem ![]() Krysti |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
Ha totally cute how come more boys can't be like this? It kinda reminded me of something my boyfriend would say too but it was really good! |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
haha!!! really cute and creative and amazingly unique all at the same time!!! awesome job!!! |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oops i sorry i forgot the W on your name very great poem AndreW Krysti |
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