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Teen Poetry #8

Plotting Revenge

nostalgic*pride
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since 2006-08-23

Posts 122
NowhereVille

0 posted 2006-09-05 05:25 PM

THIS IS A COMPANION PEICE TO THE POEM 'Foolish Man'. SO GO READ THAT FIRST. OH, AND EXPECT A THIRD ONE OUT SOON.

Well, I guess I was wrong
She actualy screamed in my face
Told me I wasn't giving you a chance
My assumptions were a disgrace

I walked away, and turned my back
Giving in without a fight
If she refused to believe what lied before her
She'd never hear my plight

So now I must sit back and watch
As you ruin all our lives
Seeing my mother's deep wound pain
But hearing her hollow lies

Yet, don't think I've giving up yet
My plan hasn't fallen through
I'll be the winner of our match
And have revenge on you

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-09-06 07:12 PM

well... i can see where your coming from and i know what it's like to have to accept someone you don't like... you are talking about your moms boyfriend right...? hmmm but keep thinking on the revenge thing... think hard:P...
hunnie*

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-09-07 09:09 AM

Umm... Revenge is great but it's not always satisfactory, but, well, I guess I have no right to be stickin' my nose into something I don't really know about.

Thanks for sharing this piece, I'm hoping your other poem posted in here is the sequal to this one, cause I can't wait to read what happens next!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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