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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
yet another of my untitled poems.... in case you don't know, this is pretty much about what would happen if my dad found out that I may be bi or fully lesbian... im 15 and it sux. ___________________________________________________ Dad- Would you still love me if I told my darkest lie? could you still say "I love you"- and look me in the Eye? Dad- I know I'd hurt you, with wounds hard to repair- but could you put past thoughts aside, and tell me that you care? Papa! I'm sorry! Papa! Your sad! You promised you would Help me! You Said you'd not be mad! Papa! I'm not joking! No, it's not a fad! "Get out of my house! Get out Now!" screams my horrible, Hateful Dad! Dad!- I cannot help it! This is just how I feel- and you just can't accept that! you Still think it's not real! Dad- You said you'd Understand! Oh, horrible, Hateful lie!- I don't know why I Told you!- I wish I could just die! Papa- I loved you dearly until this fateful day- I'd come back home to visit, but we both Know you'll NEVER say that "everything will be okay"... [This message has been edited by Jaki H (01-19-2008 05:57 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I like this one also.. i can't relate behind the reason but i can related in feeling potrayed.. try telling ur dad you've been raped because u dissobayed him.. then try telling him your going to have your rapists baby.. so i know the feeling nice wirte. Love and Light, Jessica |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
oh, im sorry! that sounds far worse than my little crisis! i hope everything works out! |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
dang i fo sher know dat feeling i havent told my dad or mom yet well good luck i believe hell still love you like always jst needs to get used to it you know |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I really liked this one I can't relate but I could feel the hurt and feeling behind your beautiful words Krysti |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
thanks... it really does help to know that others feel the same or similar... anyhoo, i hope it works out but for now ill just keep my secret cause I wasnt joking when i said hed kick me out. its come up in conversation when we were talking about my transexual friend i met in Cape Cod this summer. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
my mom would kick me out fo sher if she knew i was ... |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
im sorry! yah, my dad would too. not even my closest friend knows. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
It was a beautiful write, but knowing from experience when my brother was afraid to come out, he finally did and thought he would get kicked out but he wasn't... even if you don't tell your parents it might be nice to come out to someone that you think wouldn't mind |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I can't say I can relate but i deffinetly felt alot of emotion pouring out of this poem. Great job FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
That was a really good poem. I only wish i could wirte some poems like that maybe i should post some of my poems. Midnightdreamer |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I know what kind of feelings your going through when you were writing this but i cant relate to this. a very good poem. i wish i could write as good as you can. =] ~Zach~ |
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