Teen Poetry #8 |
I'm so, so sorry |
nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
Where have you gone to Will I ever see you again Have I lost you forever My love, my best friend Are we only separated by darkness And is this evil mine or yours Can I hold your hand again Will we ever find a cure I read the signs Don’t let friends drink and drive But why oh why Did God decide to Enforce apon you These lessons And why am I alone Walking through the cemetery Holding my head up high Are you beneath my feet Or smiling at me from the sky The worst part about your passing Is not knowing where you went Can you hear my broken hearted prayers Or is my time ill-spent I swear if I only knew How to bring you back to me I’d give my own life So our love could be free I ignored the warning When you got into your car I guess it’s all my fault I killed you I’m so, so sorry And now I’m alone Not a single hand to hold Looking at your tombstone Are you there GIVE ME A SIGN WHERE DID YOU GO SPEAK TO ME FROM WHERE YOU LIE AND LET ME KNOW Walking through the cemetery ~~~Yes, I know I haven't been on in a while. I got a part time job, and I won't be on as much now. Sorry!~~~ |
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pip_man Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 70Canada |
WOW! This was an amazing poem! I don't really know what to say, but it was very emotional. Great write! "When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
`is this real? If it is `I am sooo sorry, I know how it feels to lose a friend. If not it is still amazing, one of the best by you.so powerful, and such a true story to much, |
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Brittany Junior Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 32Canada |
Wow, this was....amazing. It was so full of emotion and powerfull...wow... ~Life Ain't Always Beautiful~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh this ain't real is it...? your love your best friend it's not *gulp* Byron is it? but great poem hope you enjoy your job and hmmm this was a very emotional write. hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This hits to close to home. It is a well written poem though... "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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