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stewie22
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since 2008-01-18

Posts 2
Oklahoma,United States

0 posted 2008-01-18 11:59 AM

Where I’m Coming From
By Scott Jones
5th

I come from rhythm.
I can feel a beat in my mind and soul.
My minds on music and music’s on my mind.
Going through school knowing I should be trying harder.

I come from making my own decisions.
Most the time I learn the hard way.
I come from morale and respect for women.
But talking to women is more than a walk in the park.

I’m from the Trinity and crucifix.
I’m from the sacraments and the Virgin Mary.
I come from faith, hope and love.
Love is the greatest of all three.

I come from friends who are always on my back.
I come from “hey red face” and “you look like a tomato.”
Laughing and walking away is what makes me stronger.
Hate and sadness is what makes me fade away.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-01-18 01:52 PM

i like this piece alot because i can relate alot to it. i usually blow off all my study time by writing music or playing guitar. i liked this piece alot. good job.

C.O.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-01-18 04:26 PM

Scott...

How good it is to see you here! I hope that you will find time in your schedule to share your poems with your peers, and us adults!

I'm so proud of you!

Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2008-01-18 04:37 PM

You've put together many ideas in a compelling way to reveal much of yourself. Your openness is a very good trait. Well done. kayjay

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2008-01-18 05:18 PM

welcome to Pip!

this made me smile and you know, it warmed my heart. You sound like a great guy. I really look forward to reading more from you

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-01-18 05:36 PM

you know those last couple of lines reminded me of my friend jimmy, he has always had . . .well . . . a red(?) completion. i just well, nice write . . . . lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2008-01-18 09:30 PM

Hi Scott...welcome to Passions...I like this poetic introduction and look forward to reading more of your poetry.

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