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when i look at you
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when i look at you |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this one took a while but i hope you like it. i look at you and you look at me cant see your breaking me? everytime i look you in the eye i just want to die you send shocks of pain down my back i sag like a useless sack you stand right in front of me as if your the only one i should see you take everything out of me the 90 minutes i have to see you is like torture of the worst kind its like a slow painful death it makes my head ache and my vision blur this is absurd your only a boy you should be able to cause this much pain its a miracle im sane |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I liked this poem alot it just had so much meaning and a lot of emotion in it, very good job |
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