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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-01-08 09:33 PM


this one took a while but i hope you like it.
i look at you
and you look at me
cant see your breaking me?

everytime i look you in the eye
i just want to die
you send shocks of pain down my back
i sag like a useless sack

you stand right in front of me
as if your the only one i should see
you take everything out of me

the 90 minutes i have to see you
is like torture of the worst kind
its like a slow painful death
it makes my head ache and my vision blur

this is absurd
your only a boy
you should be able to cause this much pain
its a miracle im sane

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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
1 posted 2008-01-09 08:01 PM


I liked this poem alot it just had so much meaning and a lot of emotion in it, very good job
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