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The Angel Of Death (I'm Finally Done With Living!)
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The Angel Of Death (I'm Finally Done With Living!) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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If every life has an ending Minewon’t take long to come If every song has a chorus I guess my life’ssong is done I’ve been led astray Caused trouble of my own But i’ve paid three times over And i’m not even fully grown First god made my parents Taught them to be an ass Then he made them conceive me And they couldn’t even do it with class When i was eight my mum got sick So it was my job to be mum I couldn’t wait to be a kid again But that day never come Every time i get close to someone God takes them away Every time i long to be accepted I somehow lose my way I am done with it all I’m sick of being let down God takes all the good people in my life And leaves me here too drown So who will it be this time The one that tells me it’ll be okay That god is doing it for a reason And that i will find my way I wish it were the truth But i’ve got scars to prove it all Every time that i start believing The angel of death makes a call Its really not okay anymore I’ve been raped, abused and drugged How am i going to trust again When i still scream when i’m hugged If this is what my life is going to be like I guess the angel of death has won If all that’s left in my life are people dying Then my chapter of living is done!! |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this was absoulutely amazing. i loved it. i feel so much like this right now. and ive gone through what you have. you just have to keep trying. you will always have yourself. -jenna |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
strength comes from the weight we carry on our shoulders and faith comes from the last bit of sanity we have left. words can smooth the heart but some words cut deep through...hope you reach out to the right angel.....loved your poem but very sad. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Jess hunnie, this wuz so powerful... but are you ok... email me anytime you know my email addy hope things are ok.... Best wishes Krysti |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I loved this...It was so powerful, so beautiful. Great write! This one's denfinately going in my library. (always here if you need someone to listen) Rerra |
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psychogirl213 New Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 1 |
I liked this poem a lot! And at times I have felt the same way but you just have to keep trying and you can't ever give up. |
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