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joe86s
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since 2008-01-07
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0 posted 2008-01-07 05:47 PM


Without you,
I am a mote in the heavens,
Anchorless and boundless in my flight
Ambition reaching past the spiral drain of stars

Without you,
I am as bright and long as the comet’s tail
My bursting heart a saffron streak
Free to trace out twilight amidst the clouds

Without you,
I am as light upon the lake
Dancing, shimmering, shapeless
Unconfined—quicksilver as the fish below

Without you,
I am a dream, a wish, a promise thrown to flight
Undefined, unrestrained, unchecked
A shout! to shatter sand and sea

Without you,
I’ve run to the ends of the earth
And drunk deep from hyacinth seas
I’ve stood on the edges of me and found--

Without you,
A voice at night, a still light
I am utterly, unflinchingly, undeniably,
lost

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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
1 posted 2008-01-07 06:38 PM


this was a good write but it was a bit tideous to read. srry about the spelling.
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2 posted 2008-01-08 12:53 PM


Wow I really love this And Welcome to Passions hope you build a love for it as I have
Krysti

fromme2U
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3 posted 2008-01-08 01:22 PM


This was a great poem. welcome to passions.
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