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joe86s Junior Member
since 2008-01-07
Posts 10 |
Without you, I am a mote in the heavens, Anchorless and boundless in my flight Ambition reaching past the spiral drain of stars Without you, I am as bright and long as the comet’s tail My bursting heart a saffron streak Free to trace out twilight amidst the clouds Without you, I am as light upon the lake Dancing, shimmering, shapeless Unconfined—quicksilver as the fish below Without you, I am a dream, a wish, a promise thrown to flight Undefined, unrestrained, unchecked A shout! to shatter sand and sea Without you, I’ve run to the ends of the earth And drunk deep from hyacinth seas I’ve stood on the edges of me and found-- Without you, A voice at night, a still light I am utterly, unflinchingly, undeniably, lost |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this was a good write but it was a bit tideous to read. srry about the spelling. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I really love this And Welcome to Passions hope you build a love for it as I have  Krysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This was a great poem. welcome to passions.  |
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