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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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0 posted 2007-12-28 06:24 PM



ok so this is definately not the best and some parts really suck but gimme a break it was 2 am! well n e who i dont feel like editing it so yea here it is

youre still waiting for me
but i waited for you too long
you missed your chance
and now im gone
you caught me in my time of weekness
but then you pushed me away
now im stronger and temptation dont get to me
and ill say "no not this time not today"
im sorry babe that i still love you
but you wasted too much time
being stupid and hurtful
you didnt even apologize!
youve changed and i dont like it
but you already know
that your too late ive moved on
and youre no longer friend but foe
if you clean up your act and get right with God
be who you once were
be committed and not cowardice
and get your eyes off her
then maybe ill let you come back
i gave myself once i can do it once more
but you have to earn it cuz i aint easy
and i wont hurt like before
sorry babe its over
cuz i cant think on you
i love you but it hurts too much
and youre making me so confused
stop looking to the past
cuz i can barely look ahead
just get over it and leave me alone
yep that's what i said.

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

© Copyright 2007 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

1 posted 2008-01-02 11:54 AM


The mind works crazy at odd hours. read one I wrote about it includes you.
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
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2 posted 2008-01-03 12:31 PM


yes it does!!!
w8 wut? u wrote one like this?

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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