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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is 
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Could it be that obstacles are here for a purpose, Maybe to let you know that sometimes we have to guess? And leap into the darkness, the unknown, And to just forget yourself, and let it all go? Look in the distance, what do you see? Something that you want, something you need. But along the way you find yourself lost, You have to get back to your path at all costs. You want to give up, and leave it be, But when you look forward, what do you still see? What is it you’re fighting for, what gives your life meaning? The thing you look at for hope, the thing that’s gleaming. Up you stand to push further forward, You raise your head and lift up your sword, Fighting for what you need in life, What is your ultimate price? Could it be that they obstacles are here for a purpose, Maybe to let you know that sometimes we have to guess? And leap into the darkness, the unknown, And to just forget yourself, and let it all go? God put obstacles in our way, Not to make it hard or to make us stray, But to find out if what we want to be or to have, Is worth fighting for after all the damage. ~me |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
my favorite part was the end it made a nice ending to kinda sum it all up... not my fav by you but still nevertheless good... hope to read more... hunnie*  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
thanx...ya, i have writers block...i hate this, i cant write ANYTHING!...well, i'll keep trying... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I also liked the ending; it wrapped the whole poem up perfectly. I thought you did a great job with that stanza, the rhythm was very nice. And it doesn't appear that you have writer’s block? "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
this poem is baiscally what i live by God did all this for a reason is what i always have to remind myself great post and excellent flow i am adding this to my library |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"God put obstacles in our way, Not to make it hard or to make us stray, But to find out if what we want to be or to have, Is worth fighting for after all the damage. " This is so true. ~Alli~ |
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