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jbal892
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0 posted 2007-12-13 12:10 PM



One Quick Blink

Looking in my past at all the regrets I have,
Many have torn me apart and many still tear.
I’ve come to accept reality we all make mistakes.
What I cannot accept is my fate.

I have the power to change, the power to mold,
Whatever life brings I’ll do what I’m told.
These regrets I may have I won’t repeat,
I have laid everything at your feet.

Looking at the present and all the hopes that I have,
Few have been answered but only one really matters.
I’ve hoped for someone quite like you,
Help me face my fears and conquer defeat.

My hope has been answered and here you are,
Ready to take me very far.
In the present I have changed, no longer caring what everybody thinks.
I’ve come to realize it all won’t matter with one quick blink.

Looking towards the future and the chances I will have
To make things right and forever bright.
Highschool is gone in the blink of an eye,
Many people I know have long since died.

And yet still you are here with me today,
Never faltering in what I know you can do.
Help me through all these mistakes and all these tears,
For with one quick blink this was all last year.

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jbal892
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1 posted 2007-12-16 01:10 AM


no comments at all?
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2 posted 2007-12-16 10:05 AM


life happens fast...understanding that you need to keep moving forward is a good thing...

and? If you wnat people to read and reply to you, you should read and reply to them as well.

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