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Teen Poetry #8

Faith

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

0 posted 2007-12-07 03:50 PM

This poem is a bit disjointed. anyone got any ideas?
and somehow i managed to post it twice.

Faith

Whatever you choose to believe in,
Which ever faith you choose to explore.
Catholic, Buddist or Hindu,
You must never want anything more.

Whoever you choose to aspire to,
Whatever you pray for at night.
No fear, no war, no poverty,
Treat your faith as though it is your light.

Without it you'ld have no direction,
Without it you would be left blind.
Without it you'ld have no reason to live for,
Your individual religion you must find.

[This message has been edited by *CaT* (12-08-2007 04:09 AM).]

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

1 posted 2007-12-10 12:34 PM

wow this is a great poem and its true so thats cool

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

2 posted 2007-12-10 12:22 PM

thank you, i enjoyed writing it; although i cant decide if i like the finished product

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-15 10:16 PM

Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2007-12-16 01:20 PM

you know, i could have sworn i'd replied to this one. i really liked it, ummm well, i'm on a continuous replay of losing my mind.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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