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The One |
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SiR3N Junior Member
since 2007-03-07
Posts 16Pennsylvania |
I watch, as she lies there sleeping eyes closed, and softly breathing pure innocence, even grace reminiscent upon her face Beauty, brains, and elegance facets seen from any glance Marriage, trust, and honesty words that she has promised me Tongue tied, what a stunning find such an obvious one-of-a-kind Arms wrap, holding her in bed I lay awake with her in my head |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
this is so beautiful. it is proof that out there somewhere, love does exist. |
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*CaT* Junior Member
since 2007-12-07
Posts 46Oxford, England |
really beautiful poem, what you and your girlfriend have is obviously really special and it comes through in your words |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written!  ARCTIC WIND |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
 *sigh* this iz sooo beautiful it makes me sad..  that was really good...Krysti |
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xbrokenxlullabyx Junior Member
since 2007-12-25
Posts 36NJ, U.S.A. |
I love this, it's so tender it makes me want to cry and smile at the same time. I love this so much Susanna V. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i wish i wish i wish but you don't want to hear what i wish, b/c you wrote it, beautiful. wonderful, and it gives me hope that maybe i'll get my wish . . . -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Derek Junior Member
since 2007-10-20
Posts 38New Hampshire, USA |
very nice poem |
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