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Fill My Thoughts
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Fill My Thoughts |
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Romantic Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28Lost in the eyes of the one i love |
When i think you you, you fill my thoughts, I think of nothing else but you. It hurts sometimes, Leaves a scar. But when it heals i feel twice as good, And I love you twice as much. Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahhh if you say your poems suck then they do 'cos really they only matter to you it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks of them... although we are here to make u feel better bout your poems  I liked this Mark And Welcome to Passions it's always good to have new members as well as keeping our old members like me:P haha dang i feel old haha hope to read more soon Krysti |
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Romantic Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28Lost in the eyes of the one i love |
thank you i'll keep that in mind  ...dont worry there will be monre.. hopefully Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
DOn't worry Krysti, i'm just as old, lol. and don't worry, it was nice for a first poem, and as you read and get ideas and style tips and indiviuality from here you will grow to be wonderous. Take it easy Mark and don't sweat the petty things, and well, don't pet the sweaty things, lol. i think that someone or anothers by-line around here. lol. sorry, now i'm joking around again. lol. -Kate
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