Teen Poetry #8 |
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Nonsense to a Beat |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
okay, don't ask me for an explaination, because this was just in my head and i just wrote it down. i don't know what it means, i don't even really know what it says to a certain extent, it's a bunch of jibberish, if you amke any sense of it i'd love to hear what you have figured out. -Kate Nonsense to a Beat Images keep flying in And everybody ducks No one seems to know where they Have come, it just their luck I don’t know, but I’ve been told That everybody sees The stranger ways the world once had And the way it used to be It has been the strangest thing That I have ever seen No one has been talking of The way things used to be So let us talk of rhymes and schemes They no longer mean What they had in glory once Attained and meant to me The world is done and suddenly No one feels regret It is a rather stranger thing Than any I have met So now adieu seems right to say I’m sorry it won’t do But all the things that I have I’ll freely give to you
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I'm not sure what it means either but its good |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
im not sure what it means but seems that u have a lot on your mind but imma read it again and see if i can figure it out oh and it was great it made me think which is a good thing |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
prety good. the third stanza appears to be rambling and doesn't work consistently with the rest of the poem. I say drop that stanza, in order to make the poem flow better |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Aweez Kate Darling, I love this flow was really gudd ![]() Krysti |
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