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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2007-12-03 01:08 AM

there's something beautiful about the
dirty water
flowing out of your mouth
and onto my floor,
a kind of trophy to
poor decisions
made before midnight
and after a gasp.
murky words pour into
pure basins
with shallow bowls
waiting for an end,
this room is filling to the
vaulted ceiling
with spoiled thoughts and
dirty words.

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

1 posted 2007-12-03 01:45 AM

another great poem by you young blood.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-04 12:02 PM

Alex, With each poem I read by you I love your words even more. Great write
Krysti

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2007-12-04 01:01 AM

thanks guys for reading. i really appreciate you guys reading.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2007-12-04 07:20 AM

I just logged on saw ur new poem n thought.. Hell I've gotta read cause u always seem to blow me away.. N here we are again another poem that is inspirational. I know that you won't live up to your standards anymore because u always seem to fly right by them and make new ones.. Truly AMAZING..

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2007-12-04 06:30 PM

haha thank you. i literally do not think about what i write. words just come to my head and i write them. The idea never uncovers itself until I reread the piece. I am so glad you read it.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

6 posted 2007-12-05 03:39 AM

Wow...This...is simply marvelous.

mcwalker
Junior Member

since 2007-12-05

Posts 10

7 posted 2007-12-05 09:16 PM

very deep and just open enough for enterperetation, i like it

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

8 posted 2007-12-06 10:24 AM

thank you both. it's nice to have new readers every now and again.

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

9 posted 2007-12-07 01:14 PM

This is such a great poem; love the imagery

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

10 posted 2007-12-10 12:54 PM

again, thanks for reading.

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