Fragmented Afflictions (Must Read For Every Girl Who Suffered A Broken Heart)

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Fragmented Afflictions (Must Read For Every Girl Who Suffered A Broken Heart)

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-12-08 06:18 AM

Have you ever loved a guy
That never loved you back
He played along for a little while
Just to get you in the sack

Have you ever seen a grown man
Fall directly at your feet
Cause you kicked him in the genitals
When he threatened you with a seat

Have you ever had
A pointless one night stand
To get over someone that hurt you
That scared you really bad

Tonight a million girls are crying
Cause some guy broke there heart
Some lame guy in some lames ass town
Tore your whole world apart

If you are simply a girl
Who finds it hard to heal
Sit and read for a while longer
Just until you hear him squeal

To every guy who thinks
That they can get laid quick
Look out cause I’m watching
And I’ll beat you with a stick

But still I sit crying
I didn’t know what was best
I’ve just got the scars
That you burnt upon my chest

You’re a pointless guy
A pointless clown
Who simply found it fun
Just to mess around

So go on run away
You’ve had your fun
You’ve broken a heart
So now its time to run

Well Guys here you have it my heart written on paper oh and sorry if the title sucks it kinda implanted it's self in my head...

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

1 posted 2007-12-08 06:37 AM

omg i love this poem, especially stanza no. 2 lol. I think the title totally compliments it

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2007-12-08 07:08 AM

Thank you so so much... Its great to know you like my weird strange ideas.

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

3 posted 2007-12-08 01:10 PM

no its great. i can really relate lol.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2007-12-08 03:25 PM

wow, i really liked this one! going in the library :]

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-12-10 01:56 AM

O, Jess you amaze me so much such strong words

Krysti

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