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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2007-12-04 10:33 PM



We got into this stupid fight
And everything was gone
You slowly lost you love for me
And our friendship was also done

I didn’t want to hurt again
So all summer I tired to hide my heart
I was careful with my feelings
And more careful with my heart

I’m glad I didn’t hand it over
On the scheduled date
Because one week later you ripped it out
And all I felt was hate

I wanted to tell you I need you
But that I could not say
Cause I don’t wanna be apart of this game
That you wanna play

I wanted to tell you I love you
But you just pushed me aside
And as much as I want to hate you
I can’t because my feelings haven’t died

Why is it we can’t ever make two months?
Is there something wrong with me?
I loved you more than anything else
I wanted it to be

I mean we weren’t even together
We weren’t even dating
I wanted to go out but I was scared
So instead I was just waiting

I hate myself for losing you again cause
I’ve never felt this way before
You gave me love and affection
And now all I want is more

I said that id do anything
And I think that I have proved
After being in the hospital
That I would even die for you

I feel so bad
I didn’t even get that last kiss
But that aint the worst
The saddest part is this:

I still love you to this day
And nothing will change that I feel this way
I guess the last song I wrote was true
I really never will stop falling in love with you

They say your first love
Never really dies
I’m fine with that
But I don’t wanna cry
Cause no lover is ever worth your tears
And the one that is won’t make you cry
If only that were true
Then maybe it wouldn’t hurt to die

August 2007



If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

[This message has been edited by rebelangelv (12-04-2007 11:06 PM).]

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-12-06 12:28 PM


Wow Leah girl Dangit it was a long one but it was a gooder:P
Love ya
Krysti

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2007-12-06 12:32 PM


thanx....this one i actually gave to him...u know who i told u about...this was how i told him how i felt... i wrote it at like 1:00 in the morning cuz idk i was like crying the night away and i just had to let it out and it turned into this.
but n e ways thanx again!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-12-07 03:12 PM


Wow what did he say hunnay???
Love ya
Krysti

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2007-12-08 01:32 AM


exact wrods were..." yea i get it u love me can u just drop it now!" ....heartbreaking huh

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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