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Teen Poetry #8

Let GO

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

0 posted 2007-12-03 06:49 PM

Afraid to love.
Afraid to Trust.
I fall to easy.
I want to give him everything.
nothing less.

There she is.
Standing there.
with a smirk on her face.
she knows she has him.
enjoying the pain it causes me.

He asks me whats wrong.
I smile and say nothing.

I cant fight the tears.
He takes her in his arms.
The tears begin to fall.

He knows i love him.
Is this worth it?
To lose it all?

I crawl into the dark corner of my room.
Felling nothing but the cold from the window.
Tears trickle down my face.

I Need To Let Go.

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2007-12-03 08:23 PM

this makes sense and yes you do. i really did love it and i can realte. ^__^

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-12-04 01:24 AM

Well this was really good and I agree you do need to move on. its gonna hurt might even take awhile but it will heal. might leave a scar but things will get better

Krysti

HoW_cOuLd_YoU_LeAvE_mE
New Member

since 2007-12-02

Posts 4
Georgia

3 posted 2007-12-05 09:07 AM

this was really good. i could feel every emotion clearly in the poem. it was as if i were the girl in the poem watching. great job! :P

This angel has fallen
Her white wings went black
She is falling....
From heaven to hell
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