I should've let it paralyze me.

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littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

0 posted 2007-12-02 07:20 PM

It’s amazing,
How much a small fear,
Can practically paralyze you,
Take you from where you’re standing,
And bring you down to your knees,
Afterwards making your hand’s follow,
Till your head’s bowed down,
I want to tell you so bad,
It’s like everything screaming at me to tell you,
And I just can’t because I’m scared,
That’s all it really is,
A simple fear that just wont’ go away,
I just don’t want to be hurt again,
Really that’s all there is to it,
I don’t’ want to feel my heart be crushed underneath a foot again,
To be dragged around like that,
Because I had pretended it was ok before,
And I don’t’ think I can pretend again,
You make me smile when I watch you,
When I see you get so into your music,
I get such a pull inside I want to gasp,
And I giggle at your smile,
And the way you seem to light up,
The minute you start singing and giving it your all,
Your face is like a open book sometimes,
And it’s adorable,
That your so free like that,
That your so strong you can live like that,
And I’m just afraid of letting you in,
Because the last time I did,
I got hurt so bad and the pain hasn’t gone away yet,
But I want to be held in your arms,
And lay my head down on your shoulder,
And I want to see your smile light up your face,
When you look at me and make me melt,
I fell in love with you really,
That’s all there is to it,
I’m madly in love with you,
And I’m scared of you,
I’m scared of being hurt by you,
But it’s not going to go away,
And I guess that’s ok,
But there it is,
I’m in love with you.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-12-02 08:09 PM

i liked the last very lines starting at " im scared of you..." i thught those were really good or at least they touched me

good job!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-11 03:42 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

3 posted 2007-12-11 04:19 PM

Very good poem... i really enjoyed reading it... i can tell that you put a lot of work into it.

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

4 posted 2007-12-11 08:25 PM

i liked it alot. it makes alot of sense. the flow wasnt great but you really pulled it off. somehow you got it work.

great job. ^__^

-jenna

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

5 posted 2007-12-20 04:57 PM

nice write doll

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