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Teen Poetry #8

Scarlet Sin

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-12-02 06:32 PM

Scarlet Sin

It’s hard, isn’t it?
The way that we play this game
The danger is growing nearer
It’s time to learn to stop

I find that I don’t know how I feel
It’s an emotion that was
Forgotten, and never accordingly named
It’s a foreigner here

But my scarlet stains have whitened
It took hard work and effort,
And some pain by trail and error
But I finally got it- snow white beginnings

It’s nearing an unpleasant place
And only I can think
Of what it will bring us
This is everlasting disgrace

Perhaps if we weren’t so accustom
To all the world has to offer
Maybe we would have been smarter
With the way we controlled our actions

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-12-02 07:14 PM

I really loved this, Kate. This is probably my favourite by you.
"I find that I don’t know how I feel
It’s an emotion that was
Forgotten, and never accordingly named
It’s a foreigner here"

my fave stanza. The imagery is amazing. Going in my library. Amazing write!

Pen ♥

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-11 03:42 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Romantic
Junior Member

since 2007-12-10

Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

3 posted 2007-12-11 04:15 PM

good work... i really loved reading it...

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

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