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Teen Poetry #8

The Flame Of Revenge

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-11-24 03:32 AM

Can you see the fire
That burns behind her eyes
Its burning for revenge
For that final goodbye

Walking backwards towards the door
It’ll only take one final push
So be very bloody careful
I don’t burn you in a bush

Can you see the fire
That burns behind her eyes
Its burning for revenge
That final goodbye

Your think your so good
But your pushing me to the edge
So stop bloody pushing
or you might be found dead

Can you see the fire
That burns behind her eyes
Its burning for revenge
That final goodbye

I’m sick of all your lies
I wish they would end
I’m so sick of explaining cause the message
never sends

If you can see the fire
that burns behind my eyes
Know that I want revenge
and this is my final goodbye

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-11-24 05:05 PM

"If you can see the fire
that burns behind my eyes
Know that I want revenge
and this is my final goodbye"

Ah, revenge is quite a strong passion...i really enjoyed this piece. Nicely done

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-12-10 03:55 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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