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WaterFairy103
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0 posted 2007-11-22 01:36 AM


~I think I like this one, but I'm not sure...

You smile and say you love me,
I kiss you and say, "You too."
You slide your arm around me
And I lean into you.
A woman walking by
Says, "Another childish display."
You laugh as I cross my eyes,
And as she goes you say,

"Don't worry babe, it's jealousy,
'Cause our love's out there for the world to see.
They can stop and they can stare,
We'll just keep walking, we don't care.
We're young, in love, that's what they see,
So don't worry 'bout them, babe, it's jealousy."

So when my friends make fun of us,
I laugh and roll my eyes.
'Cause now I know, they're just jealous,
And it's easy to see why.
I'm devoted to every move you make,
I hang on to every word.
Every smile takes my breathe away,
And I know my feelings are returned.

So I don't worry, it's jealousy
'cause our love's out there for the world to see.
They can stop and they can stare,
We'll just keep walking, we don't care.
We're young, in love, that's all they see,
We don't worry about them, it's jealousy.

Every word they say, it's jealousy,
Because I love you and don't care who sees.
They can stop and they can stare,
I'll just cuddle closer because I don't care.
We're young, in love, that's all they see,
So I don't worry about them, it's jealousy.

We're young and in love and that's all they'll ever see...
So let's not worry about them, because it's only jealousy.

When I stopped trying to find the perfect guy, and concentrated on being the perfect girl, the perfect guy found me. <3

© Copyright 2007 Kelsey Dianne - All Rights Reserved
justanotherstorm
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1 posted 2007-11-22 01:42 AM


wow this is a good one tight poem loved it

BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-11-22 11:35 AM


Aw!!! This is so sweet Another amazingly written poem...i'm jelous!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

maddorani
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3 posted 2007-11-22 12:39 PM


yea it really touched me its cute
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4 posted 2007-11-22 09:27 PM


wow this was amazinh it was so sweet love it
Krysti

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5 posted 2007-11-22 09:35 PM


awwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it!!!!! soo cute!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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