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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03
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0 posted 2007-11-21 12:27 PM



Hippocracy
Damn reality
Lives torn apart
A thousand broken hearts
sing for relief
yet sink underneath
find yourself in pain
lose yourself in love
fade away towards the leight
reemerge from the dark
and you will find truth
in the lies told to you.
Ascend beyond consciousness
become something new,
until you turn to ash
and spring up as a flower
drenched covered with morning dew.

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-11-21 07:17 PM


"Lives torn apart
A thousand broken hearts
sing for relief
yet sink underneath"

Ah, i really liked this. Nicely written

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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