Teen Poetry #8 |
our sheep |
Sarka Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 23Canada |
We have lots of livestock they take up lots of space the sheep are called a flock I love to see their face Every morning when it's time to feed I think they call my name and in the afternoon it feels just the same Every year we have some lambs that is so much fun except for the big bad ram that puts us on the run ~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~ |
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*wishfull*thinking* Junior Member
since 2006-09-03
Posts 33north east of england |
thats a sort of poem which made me smile i liked it as i like sheep would you believe it! but anyway the poem was really good and i enjoyed reading it hope to see more *wishfull*thinking* Cause all we know is falling, it falls. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow Sarka i thought this was a funny poem good write.. it kinda got me out of the doom and gloom of things good write... hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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Sarka Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 23Canada |
Thank you for your comments. Thought I would do something on the lighter side. ~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Sarka, I hate to do it to you but... I feel the exact same way as everyone else who have commented. I love the light heartedness about the whole poem; it fairly glows with smiles in it. Although, I must admit that I hate sheep! I own sheep, sorta, and I HATE them!! STupid animals always knocking me over... uhh... ok, yeah, great poem though. Thanks for sharing! "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
What a delightful read! Like the other people have said, it's nice to read something on the light side and I got to learn more about you and your life. ~Alli~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Very cute poem, its nice to read lighthearted poems once in awhile. |
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