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Sarka
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since 2006-09-21
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0 posted 2006-09-29 12:59 PM



We have lots of livestock
they take up lots of space
the sheep are called a flock
I love to see their face

Every morning when it's time to feed
I think they call my name
and in the afternoon
it feels just the same

Every year we have some lambs
that is so much fun
except for the big bad ram
that puts us on the run

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

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*wishfull*thinking*
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since 2006-09-03
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north east of england
1 posted 2006-09-29 02:10 PM


thats a sort of poem which made me smile

i liked it as i like sheep would you believe it! but anyway the poem was really good  and i enjoyed reading it

hope to see more

*wishfull*thinking*

Cause all we know is falling, it falls.
Remember how, cause I know that we won't forget at all.

So this is how it goes
Well I, I would have never

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2006-09-29 03:21 PM


wow Sarka i thought this was a funny poem good write.. it kinda got me out of the doom and gloom of things good write...
hunnie*

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Sarka
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since 2006-09-21
Posts 23
Canada
3 posted 2006-09-29 08:08 PM


Thank you for your comments.  Thought I would do something on the lighter side.

~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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OR USA
4 posted 2006-09-30 12:15 PM


Hi Sarka,

I hate to do it to you but... I feel the exact same way as everyone else who have commented. I love the light heartedness about the whole poem; it fairly glows with smiles in it.

Although, I must admit that I hate sheep! I own sheep, sorta, and I HATE them!! STupid animals always knocking me over... uhh... ok, yeah, great poem though.

Thanks for sharing!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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5 posted 2006-09-30 06:18 PM


What a delightful read! Like the other people have said, it's nice to read something on the light side and I got to learn more about you and your life.

~Alli~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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California
6 posted 2006-10-01 06:01 PM


Very cute poem, its nice to read lighthearted poems once in awhile.
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