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Teen Poetry #8

love is so cruel

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2007-11-19 11:14 AM

love is so cruel
you get crushed by the person that you love
you just keep crying and crying
you don't know what to do
you want everything to be back to normal
they bother you in a mean way
they make you think that they hate you
you just angry
but from the inside they might love you
you should be careful with the person that you love
you could never trust the word love
because love could be good luck
or the word love is cruel

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-11-19 11:57 AM

interesting thoughts...good job

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2007-11-19 12:18 PM

thanks really appreciated um u should read the other one tht i rote my fragile heart u mite like that one too

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-19 08:14 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2007-11-19 08:29 PM

thank you

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