if u could live n e where in the world where would it be ( away from u)

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if u could live n e where in the world where would it be ( away from u)

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2007-11-16 07:15 PM

ok lemme tell u all da story. im in my english class doing a journal thing right and i was all ticked off cuz of my mom l8ly and then like right then my teacher had gave the whole class a tardy when the beel didnt even ring yet. so yea i was mad so this is basically meant for my teacher and my mom but yea its a journal that u have to write on a topic for like 5 min. the topic is:

if you could live anywhere in the world where would it be?

away from here
i dont care
just as long
as its way over there

cant deal with this place
must move on
need to get out
ive been here wayyyyyy too long

sick of this region
need some place new
dont matter what its like
just as long as its away from you

need to live all by myslef
in an isolated place
belive me when i say
i never want to see your face

the mountains are good
or maybe the sea
just leave me alone
and jsut let me be

i dont care if im lonely
dont care if im by myslef
i only need me
and nobady else

im through with it here
and done with this strife
just leave me alone
before i end my life

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-11-17 02:32 PM

haha, yea. I have days like that. Anyways, this was really good.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-11-17 02:36 PM

thanx brittney!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-11-18 01:41 AM

wow this was really really goof I love the way you managed to say so much about it yet never over lapped into saying tthe same things...
Krysti

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-18 10:44 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2007-11-18 04:29 PM

thans a lot hunnie!!!! btw i miss u!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

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