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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2007-11-10 08:28 PM


ok so i just wrote this right now cuz its on my mind n yeah i feel depressed and also stressed its about my dad but the flow aint that good so yeah here

i cant take it anymore
youre always with your other children
leaving me behind
always on the computer
or somethin else is on your mind
you think im ok
but im not
you keep asking me that question
and you need to stop
cuz you know im not fine
and i need to stop lyin
when you want to talk(about my problems)
i dont feel like it
but when i want to talk
i gotta deal with it
cuz youre always too tired or sore
my chatter to you is such a bore
you always want to watch football at home
cuz you now everyone will leave you alone
dad a reason why im so angry
is cuz i dont get attention from you anymore
im not denying it
cuz i like it
your always with your other kids
which are only your student
and i cant stand it
youre always lookin out for them
and you know their problems but not mine
cuz we dont talk like back in time
sorry dad but you dont know me like back then
ive changed, ive grown
i dont even talk on the phone
what happened imma teenager now
3 more years and im outta this house
i say thanks God
but i know im scared
cuz i dont know what to do
and im not prepared
but dad have you looked into my eyes
do you see the pain inside
or are you blind
do you think im fine
cuz im not
im dying


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prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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1 posted 2007-11-10 08:58 PM


I know EXACTALLY how you feel! and it sucks,i am going throug it too. i just sit there and keep tellin myself...maybe someday they will remeber i exist!!!
If u ever need to talk...I'm here

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2007-11-10 09:02 PM


cool finally i find someone in my situation maybe you could help me in motivations so yeah thanks
prettypinkrebel
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3 posted 2007-11-10 09:27 PM


Yeah.. I know how hard it is to sit there ..and your in the same room in tears ,but they never notice...trust me i am now

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

justanotherstorm
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4 posted 2007-11-10 09:32 PM


ive been crying for weeks now and its like they dont even care

so much pain
so much hurt
i dont even know what im worth
maybe im worthless
and make bad choices
but its seems like they dont love me now
they just ignore me now
so what am i to do
just sit here crying
while my heart breaks into two

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5 posted 2007-11-11 03:13 PM


wow, I can say I've been there done that over and over again, and if you ever need to talk i'll be here for you to vent on Best wishes with everything
Krysti

moondogz
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6 posted 2007-11-11 03:43 PM


I could feel your pain justanotherstorm, I was there myself a long time ago. My dad's gone to the other side now...all I have now is a memory of what might have been. Sad isn't it that the ones we love the most cause us the most pain...probably because we care so deeply for them...show your dad this poem you wrote and maybe the healing can begin...don't wait 'till he's on the other side.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
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7 posted 2007-11-12 07:20 PM


wow it was so emotion and maybe perhaps you should make your dad sit down and tlak to you about how you feel or maybe even give him this poem to see if he finally will understand but still great poem
BrittanyJ
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8 posted 2007-11-12 08:09 PM


Hi, i wanted to tell you that this poem touched me. I know where ur coming from. I don't think my dad knows i'm still alive...but i've read some of your other poems and i must say that you sound like you're in the same situation that i am in. If you ever need to talk, my e-mail is whodaho@yahoo.com. Or myspace is www.myspace.com/silhouettesinthedark.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2007-11-12 10:23 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

fromme2U
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10 posted 2007-11-13 06:12 PM


expressing your pain through poetry is great!you have a lot of people to talk too as i can see, sometimes venting to a stranger who doesnt know who you are or what you look like is easier than someone you know..Family is all we got and just remember no one was born with instructions, try a different approach maybe finding a day that your dad has off and setting a together time, i know you want him to be the one who initiates it but bring out that leadership inside you and you eventually you will see great results not only with others but with yourself aswell
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