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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
ok so i just wrote this right now cuz its on my mind n yeah i feel depressed and also stressed its about my dad but the flow aint that good so yeah here i cant take it anymore youre always with your other children leaving me behind always on the computer or somethin else is on your mind you think im ok but im not you keep asking me that question and you need to stop cuz you know im not fine and i need to stop lyin when you want to talk(about my problems) i dont feel like it but when i want to talk i gotta deal with it cuz youre always too tired or sore my chatter to you is such a bore you always want to watch football at home cuz you now everyone will leave you alone dad a reason why im so angry is cuz i dont get attention from you anymore im not denying it cuz i like it your always with your other kids which are only your student and i cant stand it youre always lookin out for them and you know their problems but not mine cuz we dont talk like back in time sorry dad but you dont know me like back then ive changed, ive grown i dont even talk on the phone what happened imma teenager now 3 more years and im outta this house i say thanks God but i know im scared cuz i dont know what to do and im not prepared but dad have you looked into my eyes do you see the pain inside or are you blind do you think im fine cuz im not im dying |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
I know EXACTALLY how you feel! and it sucks,i am going throug it too. i just sit there and keep tellin myself...maybe someday they will remeber i exist!!! If u ever need to talk...I'm here Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks! |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
cool finally i find someone in my situation maybe you could help me in motivations so yeah thanks |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
Yeah.. I know how hard it is to sit there ..and your in the same room in tears ,but they never notice...trust me i am now Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks! |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
ive been crying for weeks now and its like they dont even care so much pain so much hurt i dont even know what im worth maybe im worthless and make bad choices but its seems like they dont love me now they just ignore me now so what am i to do just sit here crying while my heart breaks into two |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow, I can say I've been there done that over and over again, and if you ever need to talk i'll be here for you to vent on  Best wishes with everythingKrysti |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
I could feel your pain justanotherstorm, I was there myself a long time ago. My dad's gone to the other side now...all I have now is a memory of what might have been. Sad isn't it that the ones we love the most cause us the most pain...probably because we care so deeply for them...show your dad this poem you wrote and maybe the healing can begin...don't wait 'till he's on the other side. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow it was so emotion and maybe perhaps you should make your dad sit down and tlak to you about how you feel or maybe even give him this poem to see if he finally will understand but still great poem |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Hi, i wanted to tell you that this poem touched me. I know where ur coming from. I don't think my dad knows i'm still alive...but i've read some of your other poems and i must say that you sound like you're in the same situation that i am in. If you ever need to talk, my e-mail is [email protected]. Or myspace is www.myspace.com/silhouettesinthedark. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
expressing your pain through poetry is great!you have a lot of people to talk too as i can see, sometimes venting to a stranger who doesnt know who you are or what you look like is easier than someone you know..Family is all we got and just remember no one was born with instructions, try a different approach maybe finding a day that your dad has off and setting a together time, i know you want him to be the one who initiates it but bring out that leadership inside you and you eventually you will see great results not only with others but with yourself aswell |
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