Teen Poetry #8 |
This is to anyone who supports the troops, my own struggle with the war. |
comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
It’s Been 3 Months It’s been 3 months after the last shot was heard And in the quiet of my night those memories burn still It’s been 3 months with no more bullets, no more tanks, no more war I find myself at home with New England’s winter chill. I pity those who’s still at war so far from home With wives and girlfriends by themselves with mistletoe But better them that still have something to believe Than I that lost what I needed to live. I did my time and I enjoyed it like I could It’s been 3 months after my war and it won’t stop It’s been 3 months and I still lay awake at night Remembering the times I had to stand and fight. But fighting the Iraqis was not one of my concerns But the fighting with my mind gnawed slowly at my soul 3 months ago was the last shot heard It seems the war followed me back home. In the midst of heat and hunger, fighting and fatigue The thought of HER kept body and mind from becoming weak It’s been 3 months, no bullets flying, no explosions Not long enough to heal the wounds in my emotions. Just a soldier, just a boy, so far away Just one thought kept me alive for this today Just a war, nothing more, what can I say It’s been 3 months and I can’t get it out of my head. 12/25/2003 In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
You know como, I've heard it all. The view from wives, the view of children, the view of myself, being a niece. Knowing someone was out there, someone linked by blood to you. I've heard the father's side, and the mother's I've read of heros and so many more, but I've never heard from a solider himself. I liked it, I feel a bit more connected to it. -Kate just a thouhgt, my grandparents "feared" germans, my parents "feared" russians, and i "fear" iraqies. i wonder whom my children will look to and say- i "fear" what they may do. just a passing thought. . . "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow, I loved this poem is was so visual and so .. real. ~Kate I often do wonder that myself good thought Krysti |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow this just hitting hard, to hear an experience through poem is so touching and brings the war to sight well done |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This was one of the best poems I have read |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
thank you all for your support. It makes me happy that my words touch people in the way you all make it seem. Please, keep on reading. In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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