It wasn’t an excuse . . .

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Teen Poetry #8

It wasn’t an excuse . . .

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-11-02 06:45 PM

It wasn’t an excuse . . .

You’re changing all my circles into squares
All I once thought challenged
All by your unyielding lack of faith
Conversations between our eyes
Take place in-between near kisses
But they’re all misses

You want so much more
Than I’m willing to give away
I won’t waver, but I will fall sometimes
Will you help me up?
Or do I still have to rise alone

I’ve always had someone there
But they couldn’t measure up
Will you be different?
Or must I face the world
With no one to stand besides me

I have such a hard time
With things that seem so simple
It no excuse, but the past is to blame
My tainted experience
With matters of the heart
Has left me unwhole

You’ve been given a girl
Who isn’t always there
You took the short end of the stick
And it broke off in your hand
I’m sorry your luck doesn’t hold

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-11-02 07:06 PM

i think you posted this twice....

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-11-02 11:40 PM

it didn't show up, and i thought i had, but i thought maybe i dreamed i had or something, but it didn't show up and been messing with my head and i'm so dizzy and and tired.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

3 posted 2007-11-03 12:29 PM

hey kaye, good poem.

btw, how can i get more people to read my poem "Senses Fail". I think its one of my best works, so i realy want people to find it. Id really appreciate some advice. Post the advice in the poem "sense fail" so i can find it and use it. Thanx

-elias

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-11-03 10:33 AM

good poem it just intranced me very well written i must say i liked it alot

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-12 10:03 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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