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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
His eyes are like stars guiding my way a way to talk when we're out of things to say his lips are like heaven, just another thing I miss he's the innocence of my very first kiss His voice is the sound that captures me guides me through the troubles I can't see another thing I miss is being in his arms how they kept me safe from all life's harms But now he's gone his eyes, his lips the gentleness of his fingertips we never did share that kiss in the rain our broken promise fills me with pain so many memories I'll never forget so many dreams I never did get. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
even though was so sad, it made me smile. i know how it is to miss someone once loved. good rhythm and rhyme. this was a solid piece. keep writing! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awwwwwww Krysti it was beautiful i loved it  |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
this was so great to read. i know exacty how u feel. [xx] great write |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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