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Untitled 10.18.07

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2007-11-02 02:17 AM

Untitled 10.18.07

when every string decays under
the pressure of my finger tips
i whisper a little louder.
As vibrations course through
veins and arteries
i listen a little closer.
Until I finally understand beauty.
Until I finally hear the score softly playing.
Until then, I scratch the strings with plastic
hoping to see a tear in your eye,
but all I see is you.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2007-11-02 06:33 PM

Hmmmm This i great as well.. where have u been hiding all this time..

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-03 07:39 PM

wow, I loved your poems then and I love them now.. They were always so vivid and clear to me... Another great write
Krysti

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2007-11-03 09:46 PM

again...thank you both!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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4 posted 2007-11-06 08:48 PM

they're so simple, but in a complex and beautiful way. holy crap i love your stuff!

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2007-11-07 10:39 PM

Kate, I am pleased to have you as a fan.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-12 10:08 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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