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Teen Poetry #8

ummmm Just Be Yourself???

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2007-11-01 11:06 PM

yea so this is actually a rap but thats okay just read it and tell me what you think. its not my best work but i like it

You become something that’s not you
Just from doing and seeing the things that you do
People say things not knowing what you’re thinking cursing a good thing
So you go along with it hiding your thoughts
And with that you become something that you’re not
You don’t know what to say or do
So you act like everyone else which changes you
Don’t be conformed to this world
Just be who you are
If people don’t accept you
Then they’re missing out by far
You don’t need to be bad to be cool
Nor do you need to cuss either fool
I liked you cuz you weren’t like everybody else
You were different not the same
Then you feel in with everyone and that’s when you changed
People try to be cool so that they can fit in
But the things that are cool are also called sin
It’s alright to stand out it makes you unique
Let people see who you really are and not just a peek
God will accept you no matter what you hide
And although all these lame people might abandon you
He’ll always be by you’re side
So don’t try to lie and just be the real you
Who cares if they don’t like you?
Just tell the truth fool

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-11-09 11:11 AM

I really loved this. It reminded me of an old friend (who raps). It brought back some good memories. This is definately my favorite by you. Can't wait to see more! Going in my library.

Cierra

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-11-09 06:50 PM

ceirra? aww thats a pretty name. haha thanx! again i feel honored!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-12 10:13 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2007-11-14 12:59 PM

*sigh* thank u

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

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