Livin' For (Tonight,Tomorrow,and the Next Day After That)

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Teen Poetry #8

Livin' For (Tonight,Tomorrow,and the Next Day After That)

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-10-27 08:56 PM

I'm just looking for something more
In this crazy world
Don't know what I'm living for
Maybe I'll just have to wait
To find out

Someone tell me
It'll be alright
That I can get myself through tonight
And tomorrow
And the next day after that

Will I be alright?
Will I be okay?
Will I live to see another day?
Cause I'm scared and I don't wanna lose my way

I'm just looking for something more
In this crazy world
Don't know what I'm living for
Maybe I'll just have to wait to find out

And I know that I've gotta be okay
Gotta keep myself from losing my way
Don't know what to do
But I've gotta myself through
Tonight
Tomorrow
And the next day after that

It's this never-ending story that goes by way to fast

And I know that I'll be okay
But please don't let me lose my way
Cause there's gotta be something more
Yeah, that's what I'm lookin for

Oh, I'm just looking for something more
In this crazy world
Don't know what I'm living for
I guess I'll just have to wait to find out...

Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things!

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (10-29-2007 09:09 AM).]

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-10-27 09:35 PM

wut the heck is w/ all the weird symbols? makes it really hard to read

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-10-28 12:07 PM

I can't see any of the weird symbols so I dont know what you're talkin about.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2007-10-29 01:00 AM

The symbols are occurring to replace the apostrophes.. but it isnt your fault pen... I really liked this it wasn't ur best but very good... Nothing else to recommend i think your very talented

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

4 posted 2007-10-29 09:08 AM

okay, I think I fixed it...

Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-12 09:56 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

6 posted 2007-11-12 11:37 PM

LOVE IT.,,
Looking forward 2 more && btw no more symbols :]
~~REBEL

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

7 posted 2007-11-13 05:28 PM

when pen and paper is all you've got
sometimes excellence will be seen and never forgotten. Even when you get old or shrivel up and rotten. people will still remember you.
because with pen&paper your feelings are true.

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