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Teen Poetry #8

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justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2007-10-26 12:18 PM

my heart is lost
yet my mind is free
im sorry for my impurities
you say that love shouldnt be lost over pride
but whats the point if youre always trying to hide
this poem doesnt make sense but it will when i come to an end

my so called poems arent that great
im sorry i just cant think straight

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-26 01:25 AM

We all feel that way sometime or another.. It will come to you all soon, and you will be able to think straight again. Good luck

Krysti

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2007-10-26 07:58 AM

dont be down hearted and just keep tryin. u'll get them how u want them soon enough.
they're pretty good right now too. so u like the rhyming style of poetry?
its cute..props
¢¾jess

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

3 posted 2007-10-26 09:26 AM

yeah i like to rhyme in my poems it just flows better like that i think. umm yeah ive just been sad and depressed for a while and also a lil confused but yeah thanx for the comments

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