Teen Poetry #8 |
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Could've, Should've, Would've |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I wish I could love you like you love me I wish you could be the one to make me happy But the truth is ever since I lost him it seems i can't love anyone again When I'm kissing you I wish It was his kiss when you're holding me it's only him I miss It's him that I want, him that I need and you that makes my heart bleed becuase of the lies I'm handing to you and they take you to like sticky glue the more I lie the more you believe But I can't say the truth that I want you to leave Why wont my heart just let me move on and realize that i'm with you and he is gone Maybe I still love him and I can't let him go maybe we were meant to be i guess i'll never know But just those thoughts of what I could've should've, would've done |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
He must have been something special to write so well a poem over. Or maybe this is only a fraction of your potential. I eagerly wait, for the developing words, of a mending heart. The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
my dear friend why art thou so troubled knowest thou not that all things mend with time? peace be with you dear Krysti -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
ahh this was amazing. i loved it, you wrote such a clear, relate able story. great job I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Assassin_of_Verse- Thank you for your kind words, I guess he really was a special person to me.. still can't get over him. Kate- Great to hear from you and thank you.. I guess I will wait for that peace thing ![]() Alaina- Thank you for your reply. It meant a lot to me to have you read my poem. ~Krysti |
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